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topic: A crowd of shadows
by Morgan D Hafeleit starts...
-a flickering candle, then two.
and more-
holding hands
the dance
and our bodies contort
stretch and twist.
we stare dumbly
at doppelgangers on the wall.
i never moved a muscle
did you? 03/11/2008 Author's Note: topic suggested by, Paul Lastovica. thank you very much for the boost
Posted on 03/11/2008
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/03/08 at 02:31 PM I like how this touches on the supernatural, and despite its short length says enough to move the reader to draw his or her own conclusions. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/19/08 at 06:59 PM Very suggestive and interesting concept, the bodies on the wall. smh |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/01/08 at 10:40 PM this is still, suggestive, and the words are loaded with power - nicee |
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