by Mary Frances Spencer
i dont know
do you know me
have our spools tangled
wires in passing
or is it
Author's Note: Have you ever met someone that seems familiar but you know you have never met?
Posted on 03/10/2008
Copyright © 2022 Mary Frances Spencer
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/10/08 at 05:20 AM|
I especially like the use of "tripping us" here... the double meaning... of setting off-- sparking, as happens on such occasions... and also slipping up, stumbling... into the feeling recognition or not.
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/10/08 at 01:09 PM|
Yep! And I love the tangled spool image, and the whole electrical circuitry comparison.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/10/08 at 03:31 PM|
I love the electrical theme here - most effective. As to connections, yes, I've been there. Great last stanza.