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Evil Coke Bottle

by Kenneth Lau

you can't know, you
can't know
the path of the wind

but you can follow
its current right
off the edge of the world

never shatter, simply
disappear, swallowed by sunset
and endless white fluff

03/04/2008

Author's Note: The God's Must be Crazy

Posted on 03/04/2008
Copyright © 2026 Kenneth Lau

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/04/08 at 11:06 PM

Good stuff! Thanks for reminding me of the movie, one of my faves.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/03/12 at 02:26 PM

What a great take on that brief moment in that amazing movie. Congrats on POTD!

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