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Evil Coke Bottle
by Kenneth Lauyou can't know, you
can't know
the path of the wind
but you can follow
its current right
off the edge of the world
never shatter, simply
disappear, swallowed by sunset
and endless white fluff 03/04/2008 Author's Note: The God's Must be Crazy
Posted on 03/04/2008
Copyright © 2024 Kenneth Lau
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/04/08 at 11:06 PM Good stuff! Thanks for reminding me of the movie, one of my faves. |
| Posted by Bradd Howard on 03/06/08 at 06:34 PM okay I'll bite... "swallowed by sunset and endless white fluff" love that line. the whole piece is nice and concise and just what I needed to read right now. thanks for the write |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/03/12 at 02:26 PM What a great take on that brief moment in that amazing movie. Congrats on POTD! |
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