Falling Down by Steve Baba The cloudy skies Are pregnant with rain, The green grassy hills Open their mouths For another helping, Mountain tops will Surely get dusted, White snow So light and soft. 02/26/2008 Posted on 02/27/2008 Copyright © 2026 Steve Baba Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/27/08 at 05:32 PM This is lovely. Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/28/08 at 04:36 AM Very nice touch to this. Posted by Nancy Ames on 11/28/08 at 12:01 AM Checking out your writing and I enjoy your skill with language and your light touch that invites the reader into your thoughts. In this one, I thought that 'The green grassy hills open their mouths for another helping' was a very effective image. Posted by Rowan Luis on 08/30/10 at 10:18 AM i love this! it made me smile so wide. the hills do drink it up. oooh adding it to my favourites Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/31/11 at 12:03 PM Sets a verbal atmosphere. Nature in its normal beauty. Posted by Angela Stevens on 06/09/11 at 09:44 PM 'pregnant with rain' is gorgeous imagery. Very memorable. Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/14/14 at 09:34 PM Congrats on POTD! This retains its delicate feeling from when I first read it. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2026 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)