| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/27/08 at 05:32 PM This is lovely. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/28/08 at 04:36 AM Very nice touch to this. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 11/23/08 at 05:04 PM I loved the gentle visuals as they brushed across my mind's eye as I read through.... aloha....;-) |
| Posted by Nancy Ames on 11/28/08 at 12:01 AM Checking out your writing and I enjoy your skill with language and your light touch that invites the reader into your thoughts. In this one, I thought that 'The green grassy hills open their mouths for another helping' was a very effective image. |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 08/30/10 at 10:18 AM i love this! it made me smile so wide. the hills do drink it up. oooh adding it to my favourites |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/31/11 at 12:03 PM Sets a verbal atmosphere. Nature in its normal beauty. |
| Posted by Angela Stevens on 06/09/11 at 09:44 PM 'pregnant with rain' is gorgeous imagery. Very memorable. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/14/14 at 09:34 PM Congrats on POTD! This retains its delicate feeling from when I first read it. |
