Colorado 1 by Mary Ellen Smith
like a broom, winter trees sweep the blue marbled sky with bare branches.
a housekeeping of sorts that is undone by overnight flurries.
02/25/2008 Author's Note: Our move to Colorado is beginning to inspire something in me.
Posted on 02/26/2008 Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith
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Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/26/08 at 09:59 AM But what do the snow-covered branches offer to the sky? I love snow skiing in Colorado and my mind went straight to those snow covered hiils and the thrill of snow beneath my feet. Very nice!! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/08 at 03:27 PM Like a canvas instantly filled, I like how this evokes the imagery of its inspiration in my mind. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/27/08 at 01:43 AM You note your move with a wide brush sweep of words, few in number but painting a winter wonderland! |
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