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Colorado 1

by Mary Ellen Smith

 

like a broom, winter trees sweep the blue marbled sky with bare branches.

a housekeeping of sorts that is undone by overnight flurries.

 

02/25/2008

Author's Note: Our move to Colorado is beginning to inspire something in me.

Posted on 02/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/26/08 at 09:59 AM

But what do the snow-covered branches offer to the sky? I love snow skiing in Colorado and my mind went straight to those snow covered hiils and the thrill of snow beneath my feet. Very nice!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/08 at 03:27 PM

Like a canvas instantly filled, I like how this evokes the imagery of its inspiration in my mind.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/27/08 at 01:43 AM

You note your move with a wide brush sweep of words, few in number but painting a winter wonderland!

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