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game

by Mary Frances Spencer

life holds court
bounces basketball years
through ever rising hoops

runs these wooden floors
rubber soles slap and tap
dances around
hands defend

pass the ball
or shoot

silent strategy
teamwork
solo lay up

all about the score

this gym gleams
bright moments

timer digital and electric
tabulation
buzzer loud

time out
half time

another
game

over

02/22/2008

Author's Note: My son is playing basketball this season...fun to watch his team improving! They are all growing up so fast! MFS

Posted on 02/23/2008
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/23/08 at 07:37 AM

I always enjoy reading your poetry. This is written in my, currently, favorite form of lean, clean free verse. I also sense an allegory of a basketball game with life's relentless tournament of games.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/23/08 at 04:09 PM

Great first line and a fine follow through!

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/23/08 at 04:12 PM

I love the first stanza! And yes, we grow quickly from play to much more serious play be it love or war. All to quickly they grow. Great write!

Posted by Alisa Js on 04/21/08 at 07:56 AM

Another well written piece you have penned for our enjoyment. On a personal note, you look way tooooooo young to have a son playing basketball... Do share your secret for the fountain of youth with me, PLEASE! Aloha... alisa ;-)

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