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a smiling rat (haiku)

by Kathleen Wilson



a smiling rat
head pops through a wall
first dream is lucky


watercolor and ink on handmade paper
by kathabela wilson

02/18/2008

Author's Note: #31 of 61 new year haiku made in response to other haiku poets

Posted on 02/19/2008
Copyright © 2024 Kathleen Wilson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laurie Blum on 02/19/08 at 01:13 PM

This one really caught my eye! Your words made the picture sparkle in a new way and maybe it is because the rat looks so darn happy!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/08 at 03:24 PM

...kathabela, i agree w/ laurie about the rat looking like he knows he's being seen by [us] and not a cat...peace, chaz...neatoooo

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/19/08 at 03:53 PM

Love it! Cutest rat I've seen.

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