a smiling rat (haiku) by Kathleen Wilson
a smiling rat
head pops through a wall
first dream is lucky
watercolor and ink on handmade paper
by kathabela wilson
02/18/2008 Author's Note: #31 of 61 new year haiku made in response to other haiku poets
Posted on 02/19/2008 Copyright © 2024 Kathleen Wilson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 02/19/08 at 01:13 PM This one really caught my eye! Your words made the picture sparkle in a new way and maybe it is because the rat looks so darn happy! |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/08 at 03:24 PM ...kathabela, i agree w/ laurie about the rat looking like he knows he's being seen by [us] and not a cat...peace, chaz...neatoooo |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/19/08 at 03:53 PM Love it! Cutest rat I've seen. |
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