| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/13/08 at 10:24 PM There is something quite pleasing, even aromatic and tasty here. Between the colors of flowers the table and your "melt-down" into a virtual gastronomy. Wonderful confection this. It maybe the first poem to need a napkin! Thanks. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/13/08 at 10:42 PM ...kristina, ah ditto what gregory said and i absolute love the "drawn" picture of the room/casa/sala/vase/fleurs and the cute bordering on gorgeous oak table, too much...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/13/08 at 11:41 PM Man, talk about flow. This one is as smooth as goat lips. Wow! I read this one three times and it is just soothing to say. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 02/14/08 at 01:14 AM Ha! Delicious. Next time, maybe throw in a "stick a' buttah" and see what happens! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/14/08 at 11:12 PM You've got watch those southern belles! They know how to get the most out of what they bake. Nicely done! |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 02/15/08 at 10:57 AM A feast for the heart. Very nice very sensual. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/15/08 at 01:47 PM Senusous and sensual! Great write as usual! |
