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blossoming flame
by Matthew Sharpthe gear
....the tooth
........the eye
............the grind
........the time
....the sun
........the shadow
....the memory
the pain
....the guilt
........the shame
....the reign
the leader
....the game
........the fire
............the aim
the blossom of beauty in flames 02/09/2008 Posted on 02/10/2008
Copyright © 2024 Matthew Sharp
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/10/08 at 09:54 AM Wow. Follow the leader in the most cryptic game. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/10/08 at 04:25 PM Beautiful form and wording. The .....s as controlling the spiral shape.... alluring. The progression --like a collection of elements in life's effort--moving toward dealing with difficulty and overcoming by purification. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/02/08 at 12:23 AM I read and re-read and different images conjure up in my mind. I like reading it out loud. I like the idea of a pause to reflect how one may lead to the next. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/08/18 at 02:43 AM This is quite impressive! I really like it a lot!! |
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