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Three Words

by Chris Sorrenti


It's impossible
to put an ocean in a bottle
and to collate our relationship
would only reflect this endeavor

There is a way however
to sum it oh so nicely
three little words
with meaning greater
than the largest ocean

I love you!


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02/09/2008

Posted on 02/09/2008
Copyright © 2024 Chris Sorrenti

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Katerina T Nix on 02/09/08 at 11:26 PM

What a lovely sentiment you put forward here!! Just adorable, Chris :) Also.. nice beard!! -Kat oxo

Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/10/08 at 01:53 AM

The beautiful poem that rippled the precious 'Three Words' through PPS seas. Thank you for the reposting it. May it send waves of love into the world again and again.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/10/08 at 05:06 AM

Maybe, eh? Nice bit of the past, man.

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/11/08 at 03:42 PM

Nicely said. Hope she appreciates it.

Posted by Alisa Js on 02/12/08 at 06:13 AM

sweet.. .these three words never get old.. ever.... thanks for sharing.. alisa ;-)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/12/08 at 01:43 PM

Happy Valentine's Day! Be mine you grizzled swine Though for thee I'll never pine But a smile will always shine Please, not about these verses do whine! =)=

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/14/08 at 07:18 PM

Yes, such vastness....and well condensed into something all who love can undertand. Delighted! Thanks.

Posted by A. Paige White on 02/14/08 at 07:44 PM

It's a very lovely poem, Chris, and I see why it might've quilled Quentin silly. *giggles* Aw Que! It ain't all that bad. It just sounds like something two very close friends would banter back and forth. I thought it was touching in its spontaneity.

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/04/08 at 04:52 AM

Lovely poem, Chris. I bet it made her head swim. :)

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