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The Dawn Shadow

by Nancy Ames

Down there,
on the western coastline
of the northern continent,
on a narrow shelf between
the hulking mountains and
the green waves of the vast,
heaving curve of ocean, you
never see the sun rise, you
never see the dawn.

All day long, you struggle to
define a certain aftertaste,
while you hurry to mow the lawn
before it starts to rain again,
before the sky denies the earth
all but the palest green luminosity.

But doesn't it always seem to be
totally worth it for that single
belated moment of clarity, a red
clarity that is like the glorious
heart of a ruby and happens just
before the light is utterly gone,
just before the purple, hissing
steam of the drowned sun rises up
yawning above the triumphant ocean
and the huge black serpents slither
back up onto the newly darkened land.

They are also an evolving life-form,
you know.

02/08/2008

Author's Note: This is an attempt to outline the feeling I get on the west coast, why I could never live there. It scares me.

Posted on 02/09/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/08 at 01:17 AM

Hauntingly powerful expression Nancy. I haven't experienced this phenomenon as I live in central Canada, but your poetics makes it easy to sense...visualize.

Posted by Delilah Coyne on 02/09/08 at 03:40 AM

Really great imagery!

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/09/08 at 07:00 AM

Very nice poem. I live near, within 10 miles, the Teton mountains and I know places where there is very little sunlight but I still love the area. Your description is quite good. I love the sunsets here in the mountains.

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