Nine O'Clock Rock by Tony WhitakerWalking up to number one
Taking two flights of stairs
The three of us were having fun
With the four girls taking us there
Five minutes later, we hear an awful sound
When a six-shooter fills the air
One has a husband, some seven years it seems
Now eight seconds later, we were out of there
02/07/2008 Author's Note: Just fooling around....
Posted on 02/07/2008 Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/08/08 at 03:57 AM I like the last stanza. Reminds me somehow of a good Nick Cave song. Nice work. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/17/09 at 04:13 PM Oh, man you had me with you the whole time. But my imagination was heaving with my tightening stomach. Glad you were just fooling around. :-) |
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