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haiku (bare branches)
by David R Spellman
across bare branches
of discarded Christmas trees
the neighbors argue
01/14/2008 Author's Note: Entered in Pathetic's Tadpole Society's kukai for January '08 and needing to use the phrase "bare branches."
Posted on 02/06/2008
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/06/08 at 11:33 AM Congratulations David! Well worthy of the win. |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 02/06/08 at 08:28 PM Yup. An outstanding haiku. Well done. What I liked particularly about this is the layers of meaning of those christmas trees add. So much unsaid but implied. |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 02/06/08 at 08:28 PM Yup. An outstanding haiku. Well done. What I liked particularly about this is the layers of meaning of those christmas trees add. So much unsaid but implied. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/07/08 at 02:23 AM Well done Dave....Charlie |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 02/08/08 at 08:26 PM Paints a bare picture... Well done, very descriptive. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/13 at 04:03 AM Well done on this POTD. |
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