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haiku (bare branches)

by David R Spellman

 
across bare branches
of discarded Christmas trees
the neighbors argue
 
 
 

01/14/2008

Author's Note: Entered in Pathetic's Tadpole Society's kukai for January '08 and needing to use the phrase "bare branches."

Posted on 02/06/2008
Copyright © 2022 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 02/06/08 at 11:33 AM

Congratulations David! Well worthy of the win.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 02/06/08 at 08:28 PM

Yup. An outstanding haiku. Well done. What I liked particularly about this is the layers of meaning of those christmas trees add. So much unsaid but implied.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 02/06/08 at 08:28 PM

Yup. An outstanding haiku. Well done. What I liked particularly about this is the layers of meaning of those christmas trees add. So much unsaid but implied.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/07/08 at 02:23 AM

Well done Dave....Charlie

Posted by Mara Meade on 02/08/08 at 08:26 PM

Paints a bare picture... Well done, very descriptive.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/13 at 04:03 AM

Well done on this POTD.

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