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ah si !

by Maria Massarella

Life is the
my ultimate lover

its breath the
magic that gossamers

I sip from this
chalice and let its

inebriate me




Author's Note: from journal to here ;)
with a tiny edit
ah si! is italian for 'ah yes'!

Posted on 02/05/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/05/08 at 10:15 PM

I love the subtlety and iventiveness of this, the fading words... the "me" "I" and "my" disappearing into the full openness of life, it's "breath" and how it's "sip" "inebriate"s us beyond ourselves...

Posted by Alisa Js on 02/06/08 at 12:04 AM

beautiful! aloha..;-)

Posted by Anita Mac on 02/07/08 at 02:46 AM

I don't think I've ever found a poem so soothing to read. Well done!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/07/08 at 03:00 AM

Si I like....CharMin

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/09/08 at 11:35 PM

the love and wonder that makes one feel drunk is rare and beautiful and if you've truly found that...then you are living a good life indeed. this poem is whimsy and to the point. like a small well carved cloud 9. very nice maria. very pretty...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/10/08 at 03:09 PM

White light indeed radiates from this short but powerful entry. Quite clever also expressing as 1st person singular, infinitive, and 2nd person singular in ending.

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