| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/29/08 at 05:45 PM I hear ya sweetie...or should I say tweetie? Superbly stated! |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 01/29/08 at 07:24 PM yes. a great image to keep in mind. superb. :) |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 01/29/08 at 08:56 PM personally, I think my head is stuck between the bars, but this little ku gives me something to flap about. very nice. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/30/08 at 04:31 AM Well said. I wish I could say I had no idea of what you're talking about here. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/30/08 at 06:55 PM Niiiiiice!!!! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 02/04/08 at 03:13 PM Very nice...and I like the "whim" word choice. |
| Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 06/21/08 at 05:57 PM Alright Laura one fine haiku. Thanks. |
