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learning curve
by Morgan D Hafelei try to figure out why i can't find meaning in my life
and it shouldn't be a surprise
because i use games and movies to define
everything between the broken lines
that i pretend to read. 01/25/2008 Author's Note: i guess it's just one of those days,
and i'm just looking for the needle and thread
and maybe someone to stitch me together again...
Posted on 01/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/08 at 03:39 AM Well, at least you got some good writing out of it. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/08 at 04:18 PM For some of us the learning curve of life is quite steep like a 3 mile high church steeple. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 01/26/08 at 07:37 PM Indeed. I like this, I feel it... It's difficult not to define yourself with opinions, but the great thing about poetry is... (Have I mentioned I think you should write more lately...? I feel like it's been a few months.) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/27/08 at 02:39 PM A truly profound slice of introspection. You're far from alone amid the games and movies. Unlike Humpty Dumpty we all have to be able to put ourselves back together again, or else... |
| Posted by Becca Kinser on 01/30/08 at 04:29 AM Yeah....pretty much. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/07/08 at 08:03 PM I very much see myself in this piece, especially as a youngster struggling through the school system. I'm sure I'd be diagnosed with ADD if I was doing the same thing today. |
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