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Reinc.

by Shirin Swift


I have already chased my all-
No, I am still here in the tall trees, breath of your breath,
my lips tasting of your shoulder.
Your shadow waters you,
you then stumble and flower amidst its bloom –
Will you have it in the tomb?
In the vine-strangled ribcage, we used to hang out
with the Black Swifts and plagiarize the soul, I re
peat, you never chased me further
than the smiling end of the room.

01/25/2008

Posted on 01/24/2008
Copyright © 2024 Shirin Swift

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David Garner on 01/25/08 at 05:33 PM

"vine-strangled ribcage" is a great image. I really like this.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/09/09 at 08:38 PM

Brilliant :) Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Kerowyn Rose on 02/10/09 at 02:43 AM

Beautiful piece. :) A new favorite!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/10/09 at 07:27 PM

Powerful...haunting. I really like what done with words here.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 02/11/09 at 10:32 PM

"you never chased me further than the smiling end of the room" such flirtation and this sums it up nicely. smh

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