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In A Coffee-house

by Nancy Ames

Music measures four dimensions
and speaks to one who has
quietly relieved his tensions
appreciating jazz.

The heroes who abandoned thrones
search for rhythms in the dark
and, lost among the undertones,
beauty is a wandering spark.

Moaning from her rigid lips
to get what she deserves,
monotonous, the drummer grips
the trigger in her nerves.

With acoustics seeking shelter,
she's seen too much too soon,
and a melody could melt her
but jazz abstracts the tune.

01/23/2008

Author's Note: This is a slice of life in 'the village', using music as a metaphor for a lost girl.

Posted on 01/24/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/26/08 at 05:03 PM

Thought provoking piece. I especially like the refreshingly unique poetics...message of the second stanza.

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