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The Last Live Act

by Nancy Ames

Some day, when this yellow sun is dying in
a crimson sky and a tangle of all-consuming,
phosphorescent vegetation covers up the earth's
shame and ruin, the robots will keep some poets
in concrete cages, just in case they need a new
idea.

And then the robots will drag one of the weak,
timid creatures out into the spotlight and watch
it trying to stay alive in the depleted air for
just one more precious minute of what the poet
calls 'consciousness'.

And then, when the life-force bursts out of the
poet's open mouth and it bows its head in death,
grinning like a fool, the entire audience will
stand up and applaud like a lot of automatons on
holiday.

01/16/2008

Author's Note: I wrote this after a (weird) public reading but the point I'm really trying to make has to do with the distinction between human consciousness and artificial intelligence.

Posted on 01/17/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/17/08 at 04:03 AM

Exceptional... welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/17/08 at 04:17 AM

Between this and the other one I read, I'd say you've made a hell of an introduction. Great stuff.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/17/08 at 07:47 PM

Fascinating glimpse into the future; maybe closer than we think. :o)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/17/08 at 07:48 PM

PS: I really like the irony of the title also.

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