Smoke and Mirrors by Julie AdamsShe glances in the mirror, it feels
Unfamiliar. A faint cloud of a face
Stares back, shivers in the chill
Of the half-hidden moon.
Trails run circles round and around
The half-awoken eye, the one
That sees her thoughts, truth stark
And born of the night. The naked
Pane, like glass, hides nothing
On the other side; but reveals,
Like a mist lifted with morning,
The decay time carries so dutifully
On the backs of the four winds.
In this moment, she is most wakeful.
Stirred and open to dreamscapes,
Nostalgic for the bewilderment
Of possibility, of magic, of sight
Untinged by daylight or rationale. Living
Here is a mere trick; smoke
And mirrors, fooling the foolish,
While the imaginative escape, dance, and sing
in the white pools of the eye.
Staring back, a dusty reflection of innocence
peeks from a room long left behind;
it still awaits her return; it grows idle
and peels at the yellow wallpaper of her mind.
01/14/2008 Author's Note: This piece was inspired by both The Illusionist (movie), and Mark Strand's poem, The Man in the Mirror.
Posted on 01/14/2008 Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/14/08 at 02:44 PM I enjoyed this! Amazing, how the power of the mirror never seems to diminish. We see so much and so little in our reflection. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/14/08 at 03:25 PM an excellent write... so very poignant! |
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 01/14/08 at 04:28 PM Nice read! Well done. MFS |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/14/08 at 06:24 PM Well done Julie. Reminds me of "Mirror, mirror
on the wall who's the fairest one of all."...Charlie |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/14/08 at 09:15 PM Fascinating the looking and sometimes the sudden unfamiliarity, as if new. (And old at the same time!) We're both drawing "dreamscapes"! |
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 01/15/08 at 06:49 AM Loved the entirety, but the last line was a real stinger. |
Posted by D. James McKee on 01/16/08 at 07:53 PM Nice write! The punctuation and word placement are superb! Like the rest, I love the last line. |
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