By poets or Astronaughts? (rictameter) by A. Paige White Atlas at last unbound charts and graphs reconnect the earth from sky by satellite we've mapped by flight, the sky, the clouds, held not by some titan under a curse poets or astronauts with maps we've bound Atlas 01/12/2008 Author's Note: My first try at a rictameter in response to a challenge in the words at play forum. Jadi's "cloud games" still rolled around in my head... and somehow in the clouds of the moment I saw the dying shadow of an atlas-t! Posted on 01/12/2008 Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White Member Comments on this Poem Posted by George Hoerner on 01/12/08 at 09:25 PM Very well done Paige. I enjoyed this one very much! Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/12/08 at 10:01 PM Clever and you forever impress with your mastery of the play on words. Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/13/08 at 12:38 AM He is only bound if you see with eyes. See with heart and below this rictameter is a big burly man with a bad back. Exquisite verse!! :) Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/16/08 at 06:57 PM I'm so happy the Words at Play forum is coming alive again. Your rictameter goes from earth to the heavens and back to earth again into the unlimited sphere of a poet's mind. Wonderful! *~*Chelle*~* Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)