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i surrender

by George Hoerner

i surrender

to these words

as they take me

where they will

with little thought

and less concern

riding their waves

trusting only to

those who read

looking for

what ever meaning

may be found

seeing letters

come together

as notes follow notes

to produce a score

05/04/2004

Posted on 01/04/2008
Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/05/08 at 05:16 AM

Wonderful flow as you speak of you and your muse - really a beautiful piece.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/05/08 at 03:07 PM

it works that way for me too... sometimes... rarely... oh shoot, well i wish it did. nice write.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/05/08 at 03:59 PM

I don't do so much of this surrending. Mostly. But I like the way you wrote about it.

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