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old wooden brooms

by Carissa Dewey

Wrinkled, weak fingers
hold calm a wooden broom.
She stands in the quiet
rain, in this late summer
afternoon.

Her broom, she uses
to push the rain from
her sidewalk
and all of the fallen
moist leaves.

She is focused.

And as I pass her by I
wish for a moment
I could be in her shoes,
I could change this clock
and grow fast in
aged skin holding
a straw broom.

01/03/2008

Posted on 01/04/2008
Copyright © 2025 Carissa Dewey

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jo Halliday on 06/09/09 at 05:26 AM

So beautifully written..

Posted by Marcus Lane on 07/28/10 at 06:37 AM

Quite beautiful. I shall come back to your library when I've time.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/27/13 at 12:56 PM

Such a fine first stanza - a clear view of this woman so focused. Congrats on POTD!

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