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LOST
by Joan SerratelliI somehow got lost
on my way to nowhere
There was nobody
to help me,
to guide me
to show me the way
I needed your help,
your wisdom
and you were
nowhere to be found
I miss you
but more than than that;
I miss us 12/25/2007 Posted on 12/25/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joan Serratelli
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/25/07 at 02:09 PM ...joan, this is heavier than it appears; it is so deep to be waaaay past "cute"...this one borders on brilliant, aren't we all going nowhere?...and we would/will miss the "other" in our lives...yin yang...lovely write, peace, chaz |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/25/07 at 06:28 PM I know this feeling, am far too personally intimate with it, infact. It's interesting that you say you were headed "nowhere" and that the other person was "nowhere to be found;" even though you were lost along the way. I agree with Chaz, deeper than it appears at first glance. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/27/07 at 10:40 PM I really like the first two lines to this - they almost make me feel like I am spinning in circles. It sure points out how important other people are in our lives. WEll done, Joan. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 03/13/08 at 11:26 PM Hi Joan, "I miss you,
but more than that
I miss us" is brilliant...
Your works evolve as does life...
TonyY |
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