| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/23/07 at 01:03 PM Very clever!! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/23/07 at 01:58 PM Heh. Awesome. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/23/07 at 02:39 PM Sounds like a Christmas Efail! Wow, is it something like Y2K? Should we stock up on mouse traps?
Merry Christmas Dave! You constantly inspire me. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/23/07 at 03:47 PM Excellent Dave! Happy Holidays!!! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/23/07 at 04:30 PM Very funny with tongue firmly in egg nogged cheek! hehehehehe |
| Posted by Don Matley on 12/23/07 at 11:35 PM nice twist...by the way.....that mouse shouldn't be stirring so close to Christmas ! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/24/07 at 06:47 AM Dave you are one funny guy. You might dedicate this poem to Norm Milliken. ;-)
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/24/07 at 05:49 PM Fun poem Dave.....Charlie |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/25/07 at 05:16 AM hah-- I love especially the dramatic world changing moment achieved by that delete button. Excellent dabbling in centuries long dreamed of magical powers... and with such unabashed glee and plea for more! |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 12/28/07 at 02:05 AM Thanks for the big smile this gave me. kudos |
