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when presented with clay bird water-whistles

by Eli Skipp


so she's six years old and her dad fills a two-chambered pot with water and puts her lips to the ancient square mouth and when she breathes into it, the pot whistles. seven years later she would find herself sitting at the top of a mayan ruin and staring at the great mounds of earth and trees. she had climbed hundreds of narrow-nimble stairs, and at the top her father tells her that under those mounds were more temples. he tells her that the whistling pot, that so many of the artifacts in their house (like the guatemalen masks on the wall, or the hollowed gourds, or the beadwork) had been stolen from dead people.

she would spend a good fifteen minutes considering whether or not she could make the five foot jump between the roofs of the mayan buildings. outside of this middle of nowhere excavation site was bustling cancun and the hotel district, where in their little apartment on the outskirts she wanted to walk around but couldn't, because white women shouldn't walk around by themselves here.

12/19/2007

Posted on 12/19/2007
Copyright © 2024 Eli Skipp

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/08/08 at 12:43 PM

Well, I really wanted to read on. You pulled me in. Congrats on POTD.

Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/08/08 at 01:58 PM

i am reminded of Hunter S. Thompson ONLY because I just finished a section in an anthology of his work I have where he basically lived in South America for a few months and wrote several stories about the historical/political/socio-economic situation of the countries there, and the honesty you have in this reminds me of his honesty in his writing. That's about where the comparison ends. What I like about this is an almost fragile, whimsical feel contrasted by the harshness of the reality of the situation.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 08/08/08 at 02:38 PM

this is really tangible. and real. congrats on POTD.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/08/08 at 05:03 PM

Eli! I could pile you like books are piled upon my bedside shelves, yet still never find enough of you!

Way to go!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/08/08 at 08:00 PM

I really enjoyed this POTD! I liked the child and adult perspectives, and the contrast between ancient and recent.

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