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hallmark by David Hill748 Gordon Drive
Morrisville, Pa. 19067
three bedroom split-level,
the lot adjoins a soy bean field
on a dead end street where the
suburbs/farmland boundary lies.
And it came to be that in that place and in that time,
the universe aligned.
It is 1965 and I am nine and skinny and dumb as dirt
in my burgundy jacket with a crest on the chest and a
clip-on-tie and rabbit-ridge slicker down hair. Mom
wears a leopard spot coat exactly like the one that
every cut-rate store sells this year, and Dad smells like
butter-rum candy and scallions. And theres Jackson
from school, and hes anxious and slickered like me.
And Dads mill buddy, Leonard, is a grizzly in a suit
and his fingers are thick sausages and he smells of Old
Spice and oily machines.
And the preacher starts it and they pass it till Dad turns and
lights me and I turn and light Mom and the church goes
dark but for the candles we carefully raise above our heads
from the hardwood pews as we soul sing,
No-el, No-el,
Born is the Ki-ing of Is-ra-a-el!
Beside the parking lot is the living nativity, and the players
shiver in sub-freezing holy night. It takes a while to warm
the Olds and the vinyl seat stays cold, but the houses are
adorned in light, and I am drinking it all, drinking it all.
We pull into our driveway, and I see Mouses head framed in
light, peeking from his bedroom, and I know neither of us will
get much sleep. Inside our house it smells like pine, and the
egg shell decorations dully shine, and the candy dish contains
waxy chocolate cherries, and theres a silverfish under the
utility sink when I fill Pugsleys water dish and I reckon
the odds on a blue-metal-flake-Schwinn-Stingray-Fastback.
And it came to be that in that place and in that time,
the universe aligned.
12/17/2007 Author's Note: sugar coated stream-of-consciousness prose poem daymare.
Posted on 12/18/2007 Copyright © 2026 David Hill
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/18/07 at 03:24 AM "and it came to pass" - a meaningful phrase used in a more modern scene, yet still a passage to the Christmas rituals. Your descriptions take me there - the leopard spotted coat, the slicked hair, the candle passing to light the next, the sub-freezing holy night, the house that smells of pine. This is a real place with all the sensations of the past coming into this present. Nice job. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/18/07 at 03:24 AM I also like the word - 'daymare'... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/18/07 at 04:06 AM I never get tired of stuff like this, when it's done well. I'd say you pulled it off extremely well. |
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