by Shannon Adele
Today I am unintentionally
green and blood inside.
My feet sort of hurt
On all of those eggshells
That you left
On the floor and all over
Posted on 12/18/2007
Copyright © 2020 Shannon Adele
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/18/07 at 04:13 AM|
I really, really like the image in the second stanza. It just makes for a great visual.
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/18/07 at 04:49 AM|
Such an interesting image of pain. The repetition in the last stanza is the echo that might be bing-bonging around in the mind when trying to let go of something that hurts, but maybe stubbornness keeps holding on to it. At least that's the way I sense it.
|Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/04/08 at 06:34 PM|
that opening is really new.
'i am....green and blood inside..'
i mean, who says that? i love it.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/04/15 at 04:31 AM|