Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/11/07 at 12:28 PM Wonderful imagery! |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/29/07 at 03:30 AM Throughtout the stanzas' images, (all so wonderful!) you have incorporated the 5 senses. I don't just see these images in my mind - it's a sensory poem. With each stanza, I'm invited into your space and share with you all the things you love abouT winter. Look out, here comes a snowball! ;-)
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/29/07 at 03:45 PM My nose just crinkles up in expectation with this first stanza. Yesterday we played in the snow. The hung stockings and the passing year sets me up for not only Christmas but also the new year to come. Thank you. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/29/07 at 08:28 PM Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/29/07 at 09:14 PM I loved this poem! It warmed my heart and reminded me of all that is good about the Holiday Season! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/29/07 at 11:50 PM Well done Mary: Congratulations on poem of
the day. Belated welcome to Pathetic....Charlie |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/29/07 at 11:52 PM congratulations on POTD! You catch much of the feel, the atmosphere, the aura of the season through terse, pithy verse. |