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rhapsody

by Maria Massarella

 

no

vesture

can veil

avert

your

be

in

g

 

I

breathe
rejoice

y
o
 u 

are
here

with

in

 

m
e

 

 

 

 

 

*m.a

 

12/08/2007

Posted on 12/08/2007
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 12/08/07 at 04:04 PM

Speaking of higher power, your rhapsody ring more like a symphony when it comes to affirmation.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/08/07 at 04:52 PM

beautiful in lyrical exposure!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/08/07 at 06:26 PM

The form of this just adds so much to the reading of your heart. What a blessing to be within you.

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/09/07 at 07:20 AM

The essence of love is to know the divine.. aloha

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/13/07 at 01:56 AM

You indeed express the essence of a deep love relationship with God through Christ. It reminds me that Jesus said, "The Kingdom of God is within you."

Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/02/08 at 08:22 AM

Crongrats with being the POTD!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/02/08 at 03:13 PM

Congrats on POTD! Well deserved!!!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/02/08 at 04:02 PM

Wonderful POTD! This breathes the spirit - marvelous.

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 01/02/08 at 05:15 PM

What a pleasure this brings me, seeing you in the light.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/02/08 at 07:17 PM

What a delight to see this poem of the day. Congratulations on poem of the day Maria...Charlie

Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/02/08 at 07:21 PM

A poem as beautiful as the lovely lady who penned it!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/02/08 at 10:09 PM

The love that breathes in and from this poem and the form is exquisite... CONGRATULATIONS on POTD!
~Chelle~

Posted by A. Paige White on 01/03/08 at 12:28 AM

Gorgeous form and content. Congratulations on potd!

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/03/08 at 07:27 AM

Again loving the overtones, the loud and soft, light and dark songful rejoicing of this, a beautiful potd!!

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/03/08 at 03:38 PM

so beautiful, oh gentle spirit...this ever present....presence...is revered with every breath. described beautifully, love IS withIN. congrats on POTD.

Posted by JD Clay on 01/03/08 at 06:55 PM

This is pure divination, like the Prophetic Poet Of The Day. Congratulations, maria.angelina!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/21/08 at 12:26 AM

Stanzas ebb and flow like breath during ecstasy... ascending flesh in divine rapture. Beautiful.

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