| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/03/07 at 03:10 AM Very nice welcome to Pathtic |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 12/03/07 at 06:21 AM very interesting... I wrote one similar in tone titled.. Falling Towards..aloha to you and yours..;-) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/03/07 at 01:45 PM Welcome to Pathetic, Erin.
there is much beauty in this poem. it is alive, alive with images and meaning that sparkles. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/07/07 at 01:01 AM The change of seasons brings both sadness and joy and you've described it wonderfully here.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by CM Bauer on 12/09/07 at 06:54 AM So dark, but wonderful. I often think of the beauty in the death of things as well, for who is to say what follows after? Your image of fire is piercing. I think it ties it all together. Nice work. Welcome to the site... |
