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White Bird In Flight (collab with Molly my cat)

by Terry Olynik

{I wrote the first stanza, Molly the second}

White bird, white bird,
In soft perfect flight,
White bird, white bird,
Won't you alight?


MMMRRRRROWWWW!
Pounce.
Chomp.
Slurp.

11/23/2007

Author's Note: With apologies to, well...everyone. This is our first (and definitely last) collaboration.

Posted on 11/24/2007
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/24/07 at 05:39 AM

Do you think Stella will ever write a collab with Molly? Seems like Molly got the most enjoyment out of this one.
~Chelle~

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/24/07 at 09:24 AM

A brilliant collaboration, with great snap and style, definitely has resonance and under and ovetones of historical note. Giggle, I think we inspired you and your cat was already inspired.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/07 at 03:31 PM

hehehehe - you are hearing my three cats applauding in the background and me laughing in the foreground!!

Posted by David Garner on 11/26/07 at 05:13 PM

You don't need to apologize to anyone. This is great!

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