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Blade
by David GarnerHe slams me down with all his might and does not miss a beat get up
He slams me down with all his might and does not miss a get up
He slams me down with all his might and does not miss get up
He slams me down with all his might and does not get up
He slams me down with all his might and does get up
He slams me down with all his might and get up
He slams me down with all his might get up
He slams me down with all his get up
He slams me down with all get up
He slams me down with get up
He slams me down get up
He slams me get up
He slams get up
He get up
get up
11/16/2007 Posted on 11/16/2007
Copyright © 2024 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/17/07 at 12:18 AM There is a real power to this as I read and more and more of each line is given over to "get up". Pretty cool. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/19/07 at 03:59 PM Intense form and content. Looks like the blade is serrated. Can be interpreted in many ways, which gives it overtones and glimmers as the "blade" comes down. It could be spoken by the "blade" itself. |
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