Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 11/14/07 at 07:16 PM good advice...and i miss rhyming. |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/15/07 at 07:20 AM True, true. Very nice. |
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 09/10/12 at 02:10 PM First poem I read today...every first poem of the day should feel like this. ~JPP |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/10/12 at 07:24 PM This a very catchy, upbeat poem. I love the idea of "write yourself a better land." Congrats on POTD. |