by Shannon Adele
I say if you dont come over
Ill fucking kill myself. Only
Its in text and I say fudge, accidentally.
Incidentally, the fish tank
Breaks at the exact same time
And I can only think about
How maybe water should never
Be kept inside of anything
With a lid. How all of the tiny
Molecules have been fighting
For months without telling
Me. I just wish they hadnt
Escaped all over my books
And those stupid robots
Ive been collecting. Trying
To impress you.
Did it work?
Posted on 11/14/2007
Copyright © 2019 Shannon Adele
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Brett Shane on 12/18/07 at 05:47 AM|
i've read this about a dozen times. i love every line. surely a fav.
|Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/04/08 at 05:26 AM|
worked for me. i freakin love this poem. i'm way impressed and wondering how i haven't read you before. oh i do enjoy this thoroughly!.
|Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 04/30/08 at 08:29 AM|
Gah! Again, loving it. It's got a Postsecret feel to it, which you might love or hate, but hey, I think it's super :)
|Posted by Johnny Crimson on 11/12/08 at 07:32 PM|
Um, I'm hooked ,this is great.
|Posted by Steve Baba on 11/27/08 at 02:56 AM|
I really liked this poem. Great work!
|Posted by Lizz Scott on 09/08/09 at 03:31 PM|
Aaahahaahaha! I love it! Fudge n robots!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/03/14 at 05:19 PM|
I never dug robots much, but this is art, which I dig. I detect lots and lots of heart and art in this and hurt.