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Uh.
by Shannon AdeleI say if you dont come over
Ill fucking kill myself. Only
Its in text and I say fudge, accidentally.
Incidentally, the fish tank
Breaks at the exact same time
And I can only think about
How maybe water should never
Be kept inside of anything
With a lid. How all of the tiny
Molecules have been fighting
For months without telling
Me. I just wish they hadnt
Escaped all over my books
And those stupid robots
Ive been collecting. Trying
To impress you.
Did it work?
11/13/2007 Posted on 11/14/2007
Copyright © 2024 Shannon Adele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Brett Shane on 12/18/07 at 05:47 AM i've read this about a dozen times. i love every line. surely a fav. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/04/08 at 05:26 AM worked for me. i freakin love this poem. i'm way impressed and wondering how i haven't read you before. oh i do enjoy this thoroughly!. |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 04/30/08 at 08:29 AM Gah! Again, loving it. It's got a Postsecret feel to it, which you might love or hate, but hey, I think it's super :) |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 11/12/08 at 07:32 PM Um, I'm hooked ,this is great. |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 11/27/08 at 02:56 AM I really liked this poem. Great work! |
| Posted by Lizz Scott on 09/08/09 at 03:31 PM Aaahahaahaha! I love it! Fudge n robots! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/03/14 at 05:19 PM I never dug robots much, but this is art, which I dig. I detect lots and lots of heart and art in this and hurt. |
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