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coo coo

by Kristina Woodhill

time's door pops the hours
bird song sings of here and now
grounded by the wire

10/21/2007

Posted on 10/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/21/07 at 11:46 PM

Excellent haiku! Great imagery.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/22/07 at 09:36 PM

This takes me back to childhood days spent at grandmother's. The every present snap of the doors when that bird it retrived from its song making. Thanks.

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 10/25/07 at 03:47 AM

a deep rooted splash of life. beautifully condensed:)

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