| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/15/07 at 03:29 AM Max, the perception in your words is incredible. Aren't we all like that at times? We see so many outward faults, but to look within is so difficult and painful.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/15/07 at 03:34 AM Another lost soul, eh? There seems to be a lot of them about these days. Excellent work. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/15/07 at 02:34 PM At first, my eyes read "The sound of her shudder..." and the imagery that came with it was sooooo interesting. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/15/07 at 11:48 PM Intense and potent! The mixed images of broken mirror and broken self one the symbol of the other is very effective. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/17/07 at 01:02 PM Damn, Max. Thats some poem! |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 10/18/07 at 06:00 AM gorgeous sibilance, max. POTD, please! this made me cry like a little girl. thank you. PK |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/19/07 at 06:08 AM great imagery and impact, Max. |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 10/19/07 at 11:13 PM Excellent words, amazing imagery. Well done, Max. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/19/07 at 11:51 PM And this poem tells of is sad broken reality —so often in this confusing culture. It is with shattering movement of thought and words that you pulled this poem into the daylight. I would hope to share it with some precious souls under wing. Unforgettable, your delivery. —Jill |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 10/20/07 at 05:41 AM Sad, of course, but well portrayed. In this day and age, I'd be surprised if there was a person out there who couldn't empathize with the feeling of this in some manner. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 11/03/07 at 07:56 PM a haunting piece....great construction and flow, intriguing subject, keen development...your work is a pleasure to read...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/24/07 at 08:58 PM Bare feet and hard hat, prerequisites in tracking the lineage of mirrors :) Another sublime excerpt from your library of screamplays... |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/03/08 at 06:23 AM it's quite brilliant...i forgot how brilliant you are |
