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bit by bit

by Emily Davidson

beneath the rain
my nose is
running
i am sick
the october air
and the smoke
from your cigarette
dancing
through my hair
my eyes
drying up
your bitter honesty
the bitter cold
killing me
bit by bit

10/09/2007

Posted on 10/10/2007
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/10/07 at 03:34 AM

I love the line about the cigarette. It's a great image, and you've captured it perfectly.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/10/07 at 07:14 PM

i agree w/Gabriel. this is great.

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