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spirit
by Maria MassarellaI danced
like a candle's flame
reaching for the sky
flowers bloomed
kissing my bare feet
the nodding petals
fragrant the path
maria*angelina
10/09/2007 Posted on 10/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/09/07 at 12:35 PM I loved the simplicity in your use of language... |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/09/07 at 01:44 PM From "flame" of head to "blossomed" toes...this is you, "the fragrant path" your life...beautiful images of you! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/09/07 at 02:07 PM Yes, yes...this is perfection. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/09/07 at 02:09 PM ...maria, this is a beatumous pic, indeed!...i can feel it, the petals, smells, great write...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/10/07 at 02:46 AM so rich in purity & softness. bellisimo! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/10/07 at 02:49 AM Hi Maria,
Great write. It's lovely. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 10/10/07 at 04:56 AM ...and the angels sighed. |
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