| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/04/07 at 05:43 PM ...george, i'm agreeing w/ babs...not only a great allegory/story but one of flow and lovley parsing...love the breaks...breaks are part of the story-line too, breaks a reader THE way you want 'em to see it(the line or entire poem)...love too the concept of 'your pulling back in your net all the crap we've put in the ocean and yet the last two stanzas put a wonderful aroma to it, kudos...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/25/08 at 01:55 PM in casting your net, you have in reeling it in, certainly captured me along with all those other things you need to live and one of those things is love, mine. I love you George, my friend, not to mention this poem. |
