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While reading between the lines, I fell through them
by Vere Mantratriadit did not end
with a gentle
fluttering of
lashes closing
it ended with
a whimper a
gasp and a
gurgle
10/01/2007 Posted on 10/01/2007
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/01/07 at 04:29 PM This is soooo awesome Vere!she gasped I've actually experienced this poem recently during a breakup she whimpered... The title is eye catching and the poem itself makes you glad you came to see! My pick for potd and favorites bound. ROFLOL..for me, this poem rocked! she gurgled |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 10/02/07 at 02:52 PM mmm love this. so glad to see you back! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/25/09 at 09:27 PM Reduced to the essence is the feeling I get from this; the reality of death or the end of a romantic idea. The sounds you use are spot on. |
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