October Night by Kristina Woodhill minutes before 1 a. m. a gun shot the night awake and seconds later tag touched echoes with its mate both swallowed in an instant by a hungry maw of black additions to the silent dead of night 10/01/2007 Author's Note: gun shots in the country at night - could have been racoons, maybe.... Posted on 10/01/2007 Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/01/07 at 02:39 PM Tense... nice Posted by A. Paige White on 10/01/07 at 03:47 PM Down here, it would have probably been opossum or armadillo, lol. Not uncommon here at all. Like Dave said you set the tone for sudden tenseness. Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/01/07 at 04:19 PM ...kristina, i like, i like...!peace, charlie Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/01/07 at 10:29 PM You bring new senses to the blindness of night. Excellent. Thank you. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)