| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/18/07 at 05:09 AM indeed true and indeed a wonderful poem! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 09/19/07 at 04:31 PM Very convincing. In fact you really moved my heart with this...as I do have a part of me that thinks "Distance" -- allows a kind of talk from afar that is intimate in a way the every day isn't -- (such as here in this poem!) but you are right, and I will "take that hand and taste that lip" as you say... "for life is oh such a short trip". Songfulness heard here!
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| Posted by Alisa Js on 09/23/07 at 03:31 AM very well stated...life is for the living... love is to be celebrated.. every delicious moment.. aloha |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/04/12 at 12:50 PM This is one of the finest ode's I've seen you weave, George. Each and every line is as a wave pummeling the senses awake. I am particularly enamored and fascinated by------details which appear as wrinkles across the miles. |
