a cool autumn breeze (haiku) by Sigurdur Haraldssona cool autumn breeze
stokes a hot love lost and gone
but still lingering 08/26/2007 Posted on 08/26/2007 Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson
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Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/27/07 at 04:48 AM i like the play of words you use on the opposites of hot/cold. and of course since autumn is my favorite season, i pretty much loved all of it! |
Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:29 PM Life is like this poem. A breeze, a sound, a smell can bring back a memeory with so much emotion. Another good one. |
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