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a cool autumn breeze (haiku)

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

a cool autumn breeze
stokes a hot love lost and gone
but still lingering

08/26/2007

Posted on 08/26/2007
Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/27/07 at 04:48 AM

i like the play of words you use on the opposites of hot/cold. and of course since autumn is my favorite season, i pretty much loved all of it!

Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:29 PM

Life is like this poem. A breeze, a sound, a smell can bring back a memeory with so much emotion. Another good one.

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