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TOPIC: blood stains before you bleed
by Kyle Anne Kishremember
it is you
who stepped
into
my
world
while
i wasnt looking.
the heat
of a summers
night
kisses my lips
as you talk
the talk
of the cowardly
lion ... fasting
off my energy.
dont jostle
my pain.
lets just synchronize
our watches
and systematically
walk out the door
separately. 08/24/2007 Author's Note: Topic by Aaron Michael. Thanks, Aaron!
Posted on 08/25/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kyle Anne Kish
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/25/07 at 09:44 AM oooh - especially like "while i wasn't looking"
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| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/25/07 at 01:09 PM I like this, ALOT. Very strong. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/25/07 at 01:24 PM hey! i just wrote cream in coffee on this same topic! yours is better. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/25/07 at 01:25 PM let me clarify...i took the line cream in coffee from one of yours and wrote about not talking to make the pain of separation any easier...whew, this tag thing can get complicated. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/31/07 at 12:48 AM ah, cutting ones losses. for the better, yes. |
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