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* The fire of the sun (tagged! ;-)

by A. Paige White

The fire of the sun
pours into the timbers
as they lay stacked
and the hearty pine
fragrance fills the air
waiting for a strong lad
to carry and brace
and hammer into a place
of refuge

The fire of the sun
pours onto the skin
of a strong lad
carrying heavy burdens
with the ease of grace
and his grateful heart
is warmer yet by fragrances
of praise burning with
The fire of the Son


Jarrod 5-18-08

08/23/2007

Author's Note: TAG!

You tagged me good with your last line in, "When the Sun Can Burn", Genevieve, Thanks! It burned in my mind...

sure Unk, I lub u! jus lemme get my pants on
Come on, Logan... I'll give you my hat and cane if you'll take Kim to the prom for me... come on...

Posted on 08/24/2007
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/24/07 at 12:36 PM

this is awesome! i especially like the last line.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/24/07 at 01:15 PM

by the by...fragrance fills the air has my tickled my muse...you may be tagged soon :D

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/24/07 at 02:25 PM

This is truly inspired. I'm enjoying this tag play!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/24/07 at 07:16 PM

Oh, this is lovely - a fragrant work of your heart, sweet Paige!!!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/24/07 at 10:34 PM

Paige, this is incredible. I love the last line too. Maybe I should steal one of these lines and tag you back! hahahaha! Yep, that I'm gonna do.
~Chelle~

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