very nicely playful! I love the image of the clouds playing, and the lovers like clouds... well it could be anykind of game, but clouds tend to blend into each other. It is not easy to get such a big, fluffy concept into a tiny little senryu-- you did it beautifully!
my son and i play games with the clouds, all innocent and fun. my hubby and i play games with the clouds...not so innocent but oh such fun. amazing how your simple words bring to mind so many different relationships.
