| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/21/07 at 11:52 PM this took me back to summer days as child running through the sprinkler in my dad's lawn...amazing how much weight 17 syllables can carry. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/22/07 at 03:38 AM I still love the feeling of grass on my bare feet. Cool and refreshing. Welcome to pathetic!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/22/07 at 10:14 AM What a lovely image! It tickled my senses! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/22/07 at 04:18 PM Wonderfully accomplished.... excellent flow and word useage! (Boy, do I sound like an English teacher, or what???) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/25/07 at 12:22 AM this is so clever! i really like it! :) |
| Posted by Christopher J Davidson on 09/25/07 at 07:50 AM There is something so beautiful about capturing beauty in few words, and you have pulled it off nicely here, my friend.
Great work. |
