| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/19/07 at 08:51 PM A wonderful haiku.... well done and welcome to Pathetic... |
| Posted by Pall Kvaran on 08/19/07 at 10:28 PM Blessašur landi! Welcome to Pathetic. Looking forward to reading your work, I know your collection is big. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/21/07 at 11:49 PM incredibly vivid! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/22/07 at 10:17 AM another good one, welcome on board! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/25/07 at 12:25 AM i love how you blend two seasons into one haiku. well done! |
