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-name of current girlfriend here-

by Morgan D Hafele

she said, "you only write about dead girls.
...
... ... and bitches."
and there wasn't much reesponse...
except, "dead girls are easy to write about."

she stopped, retraced
took a drag from her cigarette
the same hand that held her coffee
-exhaled-
and glared.

i having just quit smoking
glared back.

"bitch..."

and then we both started laughing
because we were hi.

08/15/2007

Author's Note: mind the dangers kids... openly a stoner...

Posted on 08/16/2007
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/16/07 at 03:04 AM

Heh. Rock on.

Posted by Anita Mac on 08/19/07 at 10:23 PM

Very cute. ;o)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/31/07 at 01:40 AM

Roman Polanski would be proud to shoot this poem/screenplay for you Morg. Well done!

Posted by Rowan Luis on 01/02/08 at 02:46 PM

ahh dude this made me giggle :)

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 08/02/08 at 03:49 PM

ha ended very differently than I expected at the start of this. I love the three sets of ... in her quote at the beginning. Pauses say just as much as words most times.

Posted by Katie Dean on 11/19/08 at 11:18 PM

i love this. bitch.

Posted by Mo Couts on 06/28/11 at 07:52 PM

LOVE THIS!!

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